Write as a list Q&A Have the QNA be the focus of
Write as a list
Q&A
Have the QNA be the focus of this text, and answer each question, don’t put the story. But if the QNA asks to write a scene, then write it.
Questions and Answers: write as a list
– In the gas station, why was Leo feeling the way he felt when he bumped into someone, and when Alex was getting onto him for bumping into the person, was Leo scared because the person was irritated?
– Why is Leo scared of some of the stories, and crying?
– Why is Leo getting scared?
– Do Alex and Emily find amusement when Leo is scared, what about when he cries, like if Leo gets scared of some of the stories, do Emily and Alex find amusement in Leo crying, because of that?
– Is Owen scared, if so, what are some things he is, or could be, scared of, list some, and why, especially at the campsite?
– Is Owen scared of the campfire, or if he fascinated by it, is it at first Owen will start to whimper if he gets scared of the fire, will Owen be scared at first, but eventually be interested?
– Does Owen get scared of the scary stories, or is it Leo being scared that scares Owen?
– Where is everyone going to sleep at the campsite, list it? Owen will most likely be in a tent with his parents.
– When Leo bumped into the person, was the person nice or were they just irritated?
– What would have happened if the person Leo bumped into was angry and/or irritated, how would Leo react, what would Emily and Alex do, would Alex be mad (not at Leo, yes she is frustrated, but if the person is scolding Leo, Alex might want to protect him), especially if the person is saying things to Leo, especially since the way Leo feels?
– Will Leo still go and get his snacks even after he bumped into the person, will he not want snacks anymore, or will Alex tell Leo to go back to the car or something because of what Leo did, and Leo might have to wait till the next gas station stop to be able to get snacks from the gas station, state the reasons, and then list an outcome of each, also mention how Leo feels, will Leo whine if Alex doesn’t let him get snacks, when Leo has to head back to the car, how will he head back to the car, will he walk back with his head down, or will he run back to the car while possibly crying, which is the best outcome, and why does Leo feel this way about it, and why, why would he whine if he is told to go back to the car?
– At night, should Alex and Emily pull a prank, and scare Leo, but it’s just a little scare however, because they don’t want Leo to be affected, it’s just harmless fun, they may make sounds to scare Leo, Alex might play some scary sounds, and creature noises, and other things (but it has to be harmless, especially to how it will make Leo feel, has to be harmless as it’s intended to be a harmless prank), how will Leo react?
– Is Alex being too hard on Leo when she scolds him?
– Did Leo need to be scolded because of the gas station incident, why?
– Is Leo being annoying and disruptive, if so, why, and list some notable times he was?
– Why does Leo start crying when Alex and Emily make a story about him and his worst fears?
– Does Leo cry at scary stories, or does he only cry at the one that includes him and his worst fears, does Leo just get nervous and a little scared at normal scary stories (but doesn’t cry at normal scary stories), is Leo being scared, and his crying disruptive, is it annoying, to his parents and his sisters, would Leo need to stop if it disruptive, is it affecting things, like is it disrupting the peace, would it be disturbing the peace if the regular stories made him scared and cry?
– Does Leo always get his way, or does he not, how does he feel about this, and how does everyone else feel, is Alex glad, why?
– If Leo ends up wetting himself, why would he do it, and when (it’s not because of anything his sisters said, Leo would be scared of something else, like a nightmare for example), how would his sisters think, especially Alex, will Alex think it’s funny (at least would some part of her think that), what would be happening, especially with underwear, how do they all feel about the situation, especially the parents, Emily, Alex, and Leo, is this normal considering Leo’s age, or is Alex right about him ”
acting like a baby” (the quote is referring to earlier when Alex says Leo’s acting like a baby because of his behavior, Alex doesn’t nesscesarily say this, she might, but Alex would definitely be concerned for Leo, as Alex still cares about him)? Write a scene about this, followed by dialogue, and listed. When Leo is crying, he’s screaming like “Ahhhhh!”, Leo will most likely not cry like a baby. If Leo has to change his underwear, will he change it on his own, given his age, and is capable of doing it himself, or will he have help? Where is Owen during all of this, will the commotion wake-up Owen, if so, have that happen, they might have to take care of Owen. At first, Alice and David will up in their tents, they don’t know what’s going on, but they will be questioning what’s happening at first, so they will have to leave their tents to find out. They don’t find out Leo wet himself right away, Leo may say how he feels something (referring to him wetting himself, but he may or may not know, he’s not telling them that he wet himself, he just says he feels something). Alice is comforting Leo, David is also comforting Leo, but even they know Leo isn’t a baby (because he’s ten years old), but they still show concern, it’s mostly Alice who is comforting him, David is being supportive, and still showing concern and tries to help. The scene will most likely end with them going back to bed (Leo will fall asleep in his sleeping bag (maybe but that depends on if it is wet or not), and Alex and Emily talk about what just happened.
– If Leo has a nightmare, what would it be about, would he have a nightmare about being left behind at the campsite, or will it just be a normal nightmare, what will happen in the nightmare (like will the family start packing up, they leave, but Leo chases them), determine what happens? Eventually, Leo will be calmed down after the nightmare, after being comforted, determine if he still wants to go camping anymore (he’s not asked if he still wants to go camping, he’s just saying if he wants to or not). Write a scene about this, followed by dialogue, and listed. The nightmare isn’t caused by the scary stories told at the campfire, it might be caused because he’s a kid and he can get scared easily, Leo can sometimes have nightmares (because anyone can have nightmares sometimes), but Leo doesn’t necessarily have them all the time, and he certainly doesn’t wet the bed all the time. Leo is most likely in a sleeping bag, like everyone else.
– Does Leo cry like a baby, does he go “Waaaaah”, I think that would be considered crying like a baby, what do you think, does he do it?
– Is it funny when Alex and Emily tease Leo, especially at the campfire scene, or is it not funny?
– Does Leo’s responses to being scared, make Alex right about him “acting like a baby”, or is Alex right about Leo’s behavior in general, like if Leo is just being annoying?
– Are there times Emily and Alex actually think Leo is funny (especially if he is doing something silly), what are some things they would think is funny that Leo is doing, mention some?
– If Leo were to be singing, would Alex find it annoying?
– If Alex calls Leo a “brat”, how would Leo feel?
– Are there ever times where Alex is ever nice to Leo?
– If Leo is being disruptive, to the point where David has to tell Leo he will not be going camping if he continues this, what would Leo be doing to make David say that, what would happen, who would look after Leo then (like a relative or a neighbor that is friends with Alice and David), would David be in the right for this, is David saying that, and wouldn’t actually leave him, how would Leo feel, how would Alex feel?
– Are David and Alice always firm with Leo, or is it only when Leo does specific things, especially when he acts up?
– Is the family able to enjoy family trips, or is Leo too annoying, if so, why or why not?
There is a scene where the family goes on a camping trip during the weekend. The story will begin with them waking up in the morning to get ready. Throughout the trip, we will see some scenes in the car, sometimes they’ll stop at a couple gas stations on the way. When they arrive, David and Alice will put up the tents. There will be some scenes at the campfire, where they do stuff, later, they will tell stories, with some of them being scary (which I doubt scare Emily and Alex). 20,000 words, Dialogue only, extend the dialogue if you have to. Each scene is long. It’s a disaster in the morning.
There might be some scenes with Leo and Owen, especially when it’s just him and his parents and sisters aren’t in the room. Extend the scene, there will be multiple scenes. Leo might do something or say something to make Alex annoyed with Leo. This is before they finish packing and before they leave the house.
There are some scenes in the car where it is chaos (like Leo asking too many questions, kicking car seats, etc.). Extend the scene.
There are some scenes where Leo keeps kicking Alex’s seat, even after Alex told him more than once to stop, Alex tells Alice, but Leo still keeps kicking the seat, even after being told to stop by Alice, decide what happens next (David might have to interfere if Leo keeps ignoring Alice), extend the scene. Alice is trying to
Leo might have a reaction upon pulling into the gas station (this is not the first time he’s been to a gas station before) (like an excited scream (he might not be saying anything when he screams, it’s just loud), or something else (you’d have to decide)), which might be responded to, Alex might be annoyed, but she would most likely say it to herself.
Maybe there can be a scene in one of the gas stations, where Leo is running and bumps (and possible other things, list them) into someone, and that person tells him to watch it, which there be dialogue, including from the person (who may or may not be irritated, which there will be a lot of apologizing (especially from the sisters and/or Alice), and some facts about Leo (also some other facts about Leo and his behavior), which the stranger will respond (Note: Alice, Emily, Alex, and Leo go into the Gas Station to use the restroom (but they can get snacks, if they want to, Emily might pay for the snacks, Alice will go back to the car, while Emily, Alex, and Leo are in the store), it’s possible this scene could be before Alice heads back to the car. Extend the scene. Leo might be a little scared upon bumping into someone but list the other emotions he feels as well as the scene goes on. After the whole thing, Leo might be told something, while Alex is irritated and annoyed at Leo, which Leo will respond (lots of dialogue in this scene), Leo will then respond with his head down. Leo is sad, embarrassed, and a little scared.
There will be some scenes where Owen wants to see Alice, there might sometimes in the car ride, and at the campsite, Owen will either cry (but his sisters may not know what Owen wants or why he is crying, but they’ll try to help him, and they’ll ask if he wants to see his mother), or Owen will whimper and say “Mama!”, especially during the day time, but possibly at night too.
There will be scenes where they’ll all doing their things at the campsite, especially after everything is set up, Alex will either be on her phone and/or she’ll talking to Emily about teenage stuff (it’s possible Leo’s behavior would be brought up, but it might be because Leo is being annoying and loud as they are talking), there will be some scenes where Leo is running around, playing, and maybe exploring, and there will be some scenes where Owen is walking and/or crawling around, there will be some scenes where Owen might play with some stuff, some scenes where Owen is eating at the campsite, maybe he’ll try to drink stuff, but one of his sisters (most likely Alex) or Alice will see him and are just laughing, they might pick up Owen, there are some scenes where Owen is walking and he’s exploring (most likely by himself), have the exploring scene be focused on Owen’s exploration, and list everything he’s doing and the exploration, there could be dialogue from Owen (like giggling, babbling, and cooing for example), Owen might fall on his face while walking, but it won’t be an injury, Owen will just continue walking and exploring, after that scene, Alex will begin to wonder where Owen is, and they might look for him, but they’ll see that he is nearby and exploring, afterwards, Alex might talk to Emily about it, Alex might tell her mom about Owen exploring, extend the scenes. This will be during the daytime (campfire stories are at nighttime).
There will also be a scene (during the daytime, takes place either while the tents and everything is being set up, or after all of that is set up), Owen might be sitting on the ground playing with stuff, or he’ll be crawling around, he then sees Alice, and then crawls over to her while saying “Mama!”, Owen is excited and happy because he wants to see his mother, while Owen is walking towards his mother, she doesn’t see him (most likely because she is busy with something, and doesn’t notice Owen crawling towards her), Alice might be a little far away from where Owen is, decide what happens next, and extend the scene, especially the part where Owen walks to his mother.
It’s possible Alex and Emily might make up a story about Leo and his worst fears (mainly to tease Leo, and maybe to scare him), which Leo might react in fear, he’ll get scared, saying “Ahhhhhhh!”, prior to that, they might say some other stories about Leo (most likely embarrassing ones). Determine what Alice will say about the story about Leo and his worst fears, Alex and Emily will think it’s funny, but will Alice and David, if they do, then it will be clear they think it’s funny (at least I’d be clear if Daid thought it was funny), but if they don’t think it’s funny that will also be clear, it’s possible they may not think the scary story about Leo is funny, but they may think the embarrassing stories about Leo are funny, if so, it will be determined as the stories are being told. Alex and Emily are teasing Leo and laughing (yes, they probably tease him when he’s crying) and might be laughing (not necessarily in a mean way); like “Hahahaha!”, as the story goes on, Leo will be nervous, he might try to hide his fear at first, but as the story goes on, he starts getting scared, and eventually starts crying at the end of the story, Leo might run somewhere or to someone when he’s scared. While Leo is crying, Alex and Emily might call him something lie “A baby”, and asking questions like that, like “Do you need a diaper”, and other questions (mention them, there is a few of them). Alice might tell Alex and Emily not to tease Leo like that.
Description of how Leo feels when the story that contains him and his worst fears – At first Leo might be excited, because the story is about him, but as the story goes on, he gets nervous, but he’ll try and hide his fear, as the story goes on, Leo gets nervous, eventually Leo will get scared, as the story continues, Leo gets scared, and he’ll start saying he’s scared, and as the story progresses towards the end, Leo gets scared, and might tear up, as the story continues, Leo wants it to stop, he’s screaming and saying that he’s scared, and then at the end of the story, Leo starts crying, the story is finished, and Leo is crying, Alex and Emily begin to tease him, Leo is crying and is scared, Emily and Alex still tease Leo, but they’re just teasing him, Leo then runs and cries, while there is laughing (in a teasing way, not too be mean). Followed by dialogue, especially where the parts Leo gets scared.
Either before or during the part where they’re telling embarrassing stories, Alex might show a video she recorded (most likely in a public location), the others watch the video (yes, Leo also watches it), he video is Alex asking Leo to go over to see something (maybe get a picture with someone in a suit (maybe it’s a clown in the park), but Leo is scared of what the person is wearing, but he’s scared, include the dialogue from the video, the video is not that long, but it’s a few minutes long, determine what happens next in the video, and everyone’s reaction upon seeing it, extend the scene. Determine how long ago it was (like a few months ago, or a long time ago, possibly when Leo was younger, maybe it was years ago).
When getting around the campfire (before they start with the stories and marshmallows, and all of that), Owen at first, might be scared, he’ll whimper (he won’t cry or say anything, he’ll just be whimpering), Owen will snuggle into Alice’s chest, and he’s scared, Alice tries to calm Owen down, Owen is scared, and continues whimpering, Alice continues to try and calm down, Owen is still scared (mention what Owen is doing), Alice says something to calm Owen down, Owen is still scared, but as a few moments go by, he starts to get fascinated at the fire, he’ll be looking at it, he might even point to it, and a few moments try and verbally speak (but he’ll have trouble, though he does say words, he just has trouble saying that, he might say it more than once, but he will still have trouble), Alice will help him (especially with him speaking), while laughing, they then go back to looking at the fire.
Scenes in order: Each scene is very long.
– The sun shines
– Alice gets up
– Alice tells David to get up
Notes: VERY IMPORTANT TO THE STORY
– Owen mostly speaks through “goo-goo gaga”, or just baby noises (like giggling and cooing), but he can sometimes speak verbally, but not fully. There is no dialogue when he makes baby sounds, or is upset, like sniffling for example. The only time he has dialogue is when he says, “goo-goo gaga”, when he tries to verbally speak, or when he cries.
– Whenever Owen cries the dialogue says “Waaaaaah!”. (this is reserved for when Owen cries)
– Owen either walks, crawls, or gets carried by his family
– Leo can sometimes get whiny, which will cause Alex to want to snap, and slap him, but she doesn’t, though she will get annoyed by this.
– Emily, Alex, Leo, and Owen do not all wake up at the same time.
– Alex likes to be on her phone a lot
– Leo can be pretty annoying a lot
– Emily is not really “mean” to Leo, she playfully teases Leo, while Alex can some-what nice to Leo, she mostly gets annoyed or teases him.
– Leo likes to play a lot.
– We see all the characters relationships with other.
– Leo will sometimes hold Owen, but it might not end well.
– Owen likes being held by Alex.
– Whenever a character is in the bathroom (to brush teeth, go to their business, or to shower), the person inside keeps the bathroom door shut for privacy.
– Have the dialogue be a little realistic.
– The only time the characters call for someone is when they’re on the stairs, they can’t really call from downstairs, because of the layout of the house.
– Alice and David are sometimes tired when they have to deal with four kids, even if Leo does seem to be bothering them, they don’t show annoyance, because he is their son, and he is still learning.
– Each scene is pretty long. And the scenes that have dialogue, they have a lot.
– Whenever a character talks sometimes it says their expressions, example: Alex (annoyed), Leo (pouting), Owen (cooing), Owen (whimpering).
– Owen’s dialogue will say something like this – Owen (cooing):, Owen: Goo-goo gaga, Owen (giggles):, Owen (whimpering);, Owen (sniffling):
– Owen doesn’t say anything when he coos, giggles, whimpers, or sniffles, but it is listed as dialogue even though he’s not speaking.
– Most of the time when Leo is being annoying, or says something that is him being annoying, she responds to him, but sometimes she’ll just ignore him.
– Leo calls his parents Mom and Dad.
– Every time a character talks, it’s followed by dialogue.
– The whole story is dialogue, no narration.
– Leo is not “babied” by his parents. Sometimes, Alice would be sad that her kids are growing up so fast, she does not baby Emily, Alex, and Leo.
– Emily, Alex, and Leo call Alice and David, Mom and Dad, because they’re their parents, Owen on the other hand calls Alice and David, Mama and Dada, because he is a baby, Owen is the only sibling that calls his parents Mama and Dada, because of his age.
– Leo sometimes stutters when he is nervous, this is usually when he’s sad or crying.
– Leo sometimes get sad when he’s told off.
– Alex gets so frustrated with Leo’s annoying behavior, and his whining, and in her mind, she wants to slap the crap out of him
– If Leo gets scared of something during the campfire scene, Alex will make fun of him for it, (but not in a mean way), Leo might be crying (he would not be crying because of Alex’s teasing, it would likely be because he is scared, BUT that is IF he is crying).
– Alex is really kind to Owen.
– Leo is told to shut up by Alex mostly, because Leo is being annoying. Alex might tell Leo to stop acting like a baby.
– Leo’s behavior add to the chaos of the morning.
– The order of everyone waking up: Alice and David wake up first, then Emily wakes up many minutes later, then Alex around 10 minutes, then around 15+ minutes, Leo wake up, then when they are all downstairs, Alice tells Alex to head up and go get Owen from his crib, which Alex is glad to be doing this (because Alex likes Owen).
– Leo does not always get what he wants, regardless of whether he begs, Leo can’t always get what he wants.
– Emily and Alex get along well, they both get annoyed when Leo bothers them.
– Emily and Alex can get themselves up, they are old enough to do that.
– A majority of the arguments if because Leo is being annoying and disruptive, Alex and Leo sometimes get into fights.
– Only Alice calls Leo “Honey” or “Sweetie”, David does not.
– Emily and Alex are mature, they can get up on their own, they are responsible enough, and they understand when others are busy, they both also get ready on their own.
– Leo is energetic and runs around a lot, we see him run around at the campsite.
– Owen might cry if he wants (or needs) something, like if he wants to see his mother, if he’s hungry, etc.
– Leo mainly starts crying when Alex and Emily make a story that includes Leo’s worst fears, we still his reactions to the stories prior.
– Owen doesn’t cry in the morning, at least he doesn’t when he wakes up, Owen coos when he wakes up, and he is happy to see whoever is waking him up.
– The sleeping arrangements at the campsite are – Alice and David are sleeping in a tent, Emily and Alex share a tent, Leo has his own tent, and Owen shares a tent with his parents.
– Leo most likely does not cry like a baby, especially given his age, so there for Leo does not cry like a baby. So, he cries like a kid his age.
Siblings Relationship:
Emily:
– Alex: Alex and Emily get along pretty well, they are sarcastic to each other, but they get along.
– Leo: Emily thinks Leo is a little annoying, but she is a lot nicer to him, than Alex is to Leo.
– Owen: Emily gets along with her youngest brother.
Alex:
– Emily: Alex and Emily get along pretty well, they are sarcastic to each other, but they get along, they both think Leo is annoying, but Emily is a little nicer to Leo.
– Leo: Alex thinks Leo is annoying, Leo and Alex get into sibling arguments a lot, if something stinks, and Alex mentions it, he’ll say that Alex smells like that. Alex can get really mad at Leo, and if he pushes her too far, or he does something to upset her, she’ll scream at him, which can scare Leo depending on Alex’s tone.
– Owen: Alex thinks Owen is a cute baby, she is a caring sister towards him, she carries him sometimes, she sometimes gets annoyed when he cries a lot, but she tries her best to calm him down, Overall, Alex doesn’t treat him the same as she does Leo. Leo gets upset when Alex gets to hold Owen. Alex is NEVER mean to Owen, in fact, she is a lot nicer to Owen, than she is to Leo. Alex is sometimes a little protective of Owen (example: If Leo drops Owen, Alex will get mad at Leo.)
Leo:
– Emily: Leo and Emily get along pretty well, Emily thinks Leo is a little annoying, but Emily is a little nicer to Leo.
– Alex: Leo annoys Alex a lot, Leo and Alex get into sibling arguments a lot, he thinks she is a big meanie, sometimes he annoys her just for the fun of it. Leo gets scared and sad when Alex yells at him.
– Owen: Leo likes his younger brother, sometimes he will give him some of food, he tries to be a good older brother towards Owen.
Owen:
– Emily: Owen is still young, but he likes his oldest sister.
– Alex: Owen is still young, but he likes his older sister.
– Leo: Owen is still young, but he likes his older brother.
Character Aliases: used throughout the story
Alice
– Allison (real name, rarely used)
– Alice (what everyone calls her)
– Sis (Said by Tom only)
– Mom (Said by Emily, Alex, and Leo)
– Mama (Said by Owen)
– Aunt Alice (by Ben, Ethan, and Chloe)
– Honey (Said by David)
David
– Dad (Said by Emily, Alex, and Leo)
– Dada (Said by Owen)
– Uncle David (Said by Ben, Ethan, and Chloe)
– Dave (Said by Tom)
Emily
– Emily
– Sis (Said by Alex and Leo)
– Em (Said by Alex)
– Sissy (maybe) (Said by Owen)
Alex
– Alexandra (Real name) (rarely used)
– Alex (nickname, what everyone calls her, including her parents)
– Sis (Said by Emily and Leo)
– Big Sis (Said by Leo)
– Meanie (Said by Leo)
– Sissy (maybe) (Said by Owen)
– A-lex (Said by Owen only, as he is a baby and is still learning how to say her name)
– Girl! (Siad by Chloe)
Leo
– Leo
– Annoying (Said by Alex)
– Annoying Little Rat (Said by Alex)
– Bro (Said by Emily)
– Little Bro (Said by Emily)
– Little Dude (Said by his older cousins, Ben and Ethan)
– Son (Said by his dad)
– Little Creep (Said by Alex)
– Monster (Said by Alex) (used mostly when she is mad at him)
– Insect (Said by Alex) (used mostly when she is mad at him)
– Growing boy
– Big Boy (Said by himself, his mother, and Alex)
Owen
– Owen
– Mini-me (Said by Alex) (only says that to describe him, only used when carrying him, but doesn’t use it often)
– Little Bro (Said by Leo)
– Little Brother (Said by Leo)
– My boy (Said by his dad)
– Ow (Said by Leo)
Character Designs: Physical Appearance (don’t list in the text)
Alice (Mother)
– Gender: Female
– Age: 45
– Relatives:
– David (husband)
– Emily (daughter)
– Alex (daughter)
– Leo (son)
– Owen (son)
– Elizabeth (mother)
– William (father)
– Tom (younger brother)
– Catherine (sister-in-law)
– Ben (nephew)
– Ethan (nephew)
– Chloe (niece)
David
– Gender: Male
– Age: 47
– Relatives:
– Alice (wife)
– Emily (daughter)
– Alex (daughter)
– Leo (son)
– Owen (son)
– Elizabeth (mother-in-law)
– William (father-in-law)
– Tom (brother-in-law)
– Catherine (co-sister-in-law)
– Ben (nephew)
– Ethan (nephew)
– Chloe (niece)
Siblings:
Emily
– Gender: Female
– Age: 17
– Personality: responsible, mature, slightly sarcastic, teases Leo sometimes
– Design:
– Shirt: Dark Green Denim Jacket, white shirt with light gray stripes
– Pants: Blue Jean Shorts
– Shoes: Brown stylish Boots
– Hair Color: Brown
– Relatives:
– David (father)
– Alice (mother)
– Alex (younger sister)
– Leo (younger brother)
– Owen (youngest brother)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
– Tom (uncle)
– Catherine (aunt)
– Ben (cousin)
– Ethan (cousin)
– Chloe (cousin)
Alex
– Gender: Female
– Age: 14
– Personality: sarcastic, witty, snarky, easily annoyed (by her younger brother), caring
– Design:
– Shirt: White Jacket, Gray Shirt
– Pants: Blue Jean Shorts
– Shoes: White Tennis Shoes, with white laces
– Socks: Short White ankle socks
– Hair Color: Black
– Accessories: Red headband
– Relatives:
– David (father)
– Alice (mother)
– Emily (older sister)
– Leo (younger brother)
– Owen (youngest brother)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
– Tom (uncle)
– Catherine (aunt)
– Ben (cousin)
– Ethan (cousin)
– Chloe (cousin)
Leo
– Gender: Male
– Age: 10
– Personality: friendly, energetic, annoying (to his older sister, Alex), easily scared (especially of the dark)
– Design:
– Shirt: Blue short sleeve Rocket League Shirt with a white undershirt
– Pants: Blue Jeans
– Shoes: Black converse with white laces
– Hair Color: Brown
– Accessories: Blue Cap
– Relatives:
– David (father)
– Alice (mother)
– Emily (oldest sister)
– Alex (older sister)
– Owen (younger brother)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
– Tom (uncle)
– Catherine (aunt)
– Ben (cousin)
– Ethan (cousin)
– Chloe (cousin)
Owen
– Gender: Male
– Age: 1
– Personality:
– Design:
– Outfit: Blue onesie
– Hair Color: Brown
– Relatives:
– David (father)
– Alice (mother)
– Emily (oldest sister)
– Alex (older sister)
– Leo (older brother)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
– Tom (uncle)
– Catherine (aunt)
– Ben (cousin)
– Ethan (cousin)
– Chloe (cousin)
Grandparents:
Grandmother (Elizabeth)
– Gender: Female
– Age: 68
– Personality:
– Design:
– Shirt:
– Pants:
– Shoes: type, color, shoelaces color (if have any), sole color
– Hair Color: White
– Accessories:
– Relatives:
– William (husband)
– Alice (daughter)
– David (son-in-law)
– Emily (granddaughter)
– Alex (granddaughter)
– Leo (grandson)
– Owen (grandson)
– Tom (son)
– Catherine (daughter-in-law)
– Ben (grandson)
– Ethan (grandson)
– Chloe (granddaughter)
Grandfather (William)
– Gender: Male
– Age: 60-70 (you decide)
– Personality:
– Design:
– Shirt:
– Pants:
– Shoes: type, color, shoelaces color (if have any), sole color
– Hair Color: White
– Accessories:
– Relatives:
– Elizabeth (wife)
– Alice (daughter)
– David (son-in-law)
– Emily (granddaughter)
– Alex (granddaughter)
– Leo (grandson)
– Owen (grandson)
– Tom (son)
– Catherine (daughter-in-law)
– Ben (grandson)
– Ethan (grandson)
– Chloe (granddaughter)
Uncle, Aunt, and Cousins:
Thomas (Tom) (Uncle)
– Gender: Male
– Age: 42
– Relatives:
– Catherine (wife)
– Ben (son)
– Ethan (son)
– Chloe (daughter)
– Alice (older sister)
– David (brother-in-law)
– Emily (niece)
– Alex (niece)
– Leo (nephew)
– Owen (nephew)
– Elizabeth (mother)
– William (father)
Aunt (Catherine)
– Gender: Female
– Age: 40
– Relatives:
– Tom (husband)
– Ben (son)
– Ethan (son)
– Chloe (daughter)
– Alice (sister-in-law)
– David (co-brother-in-law)
– Emily (niece)
– Alex (niece)
– Leo (nephew)
– Owen (nephew)
– Elizabeth (mother-in-law)
– William (father-in-law)
Benjamin (Ben) (Cousin)
– Gender: Male
– Age: 19-20
– Relatives:
– Catherine (mother)
– Tom (father)
– Ethan (younger brother)
– Chloe (younger sister)
– David (uncle)
– Alice (aunt)
– Emily (cousin)
– Alex (cousin)
– Leo (cousin)
– Owen (cousin)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
Ethan
– Gender: Male
– Age: 16
– Relatives:
– Catherine (mother)
– Tom (father)
– Ben (older brother)
– Chloe (younger sister)
– David (uncle)
– Alice (aunt)
– Emily (cousin)
– Alex (cousin)
– Leo (cousin)
– Owen (cousin)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
Chloe
– Gender: Female
– Age: 13
– Relatives:
– Catherine (mother)
– Thomas (father)
– Benjamin (oldest brother)
– Ethan (older brother)
– David (uncle)
– Alice (aunt)
– Emily (cousin)
– Alex (cousin)
– Leo (cousin)
– Owen (cousin)
– Elizabeth (grandmother)
– William (grandfather)
Note: Grandmother, Grandfather, Uncle, Aunt, and Cousin don’t have the same last name as the 4 siblings, since they are on the maternal side of the family, and Mother now has Father’s last name, since she is married to him.
Family House:
– Story: 1 story house, or 2 story
– Living Room
– Kitchen
– Bathrooms
– Master Bathroom (Alice and David’s bathroom)
– Siblings Bathroom (Emily, Alex, and Leo’s bathroom)
– Bedrooms:
– Parents Bedroom
– Emily’s Bedroom
– Alex’s Bedroom
– Leo’s Bedroom
– Owen’s Bedroom
– Guest Bedroom
– Family Photos:
– List some family photos
– A photo of all the siblings, Leo is on Emily’s Back, Alex is standing next to Emily while holding Owen.
– A picture of the whole family, Leo is on his mom’s back, Alex is standing in the middle, Emily is standing next to Alex, their dad is behind them putting his arm around one of his daughters, and Alice is holding Leo.
Family House Layout: this is how the family’s house looks like in the story.
House:
When entering the house, the dining room is to the left, and to the right is a small hallway that leads to the garage, when going into the dining room on the left after entering the house , you can turn right, and head into the kitchen, in the kitchen, at the counter are 3 stools (One where Emily sits, one where Alex sits, and one where Leo sits), and there is a high chair, which is where Owen sits. when to the right, when exiting through the exit, there is the living room which is pretty big (the kitchen is next to the living room, you can go into the kitchen either through the dining room or the living room), another way to the living room is when you enter the house, go down the corridor and the living room is right there, in the living room, turn right, and go through the small corridor, in the small corridor, in front leads to the playroom, and to the right is stairs that lead upstairs, if you go in front to the room, when in the room turn right, and go down the corridor, and into the playroom, then take a right, and go down the corridor, in the corridor, to the right is the basement, when heading down the corridor after leaving the playroom, it leads to the study room, when deciding to go upstairs, go up the stairs, turn the corner, then go up the stairs, at the top of the stairs, turn the corner and then walk down the corridor, at the end of the corridor, you can go either left or right, on the left side of the hallway is the master bedroom (Alice and David’s room) (which is at the very end) (the master bathroom is in the master bedroom, upon entering the master bedroom, turn right and go into the bathroom), Emily’s room, David’s office, and the Guest Bedroom (which is front of Emily’s room, and David’s office), on the right side is Alex’s room, Leo’s Room, and Owen’s Room (Owen’s room is in front of Leo and Alex’s Room), at the end of the hallway is the bathroom (where all the siblings share the bathroom).
Basement:
When entering the basement, open the door to the basement, turn the corner, and go down the steps, in the basement is a pool table, the laundry room is also in the basement.
Backyard:
In the kitchen, near the entrance to the living room, there are sliding doors, go through the sliding doors, and head outside, on the porch is a grill and some chairs to relax in, and in front is a pool and there are also chairs to relax in, in front of the pool is the grassy area where there is a sandpit (in the middle), a swing set (to the left), and a trampoline (to the right).
Questions and Answers:
- In the gas station, why was Leo feeling the way he felt when he bumped into someone, and when Alex was getting onto him for bumping into the person, was Leo scared because the person was irritated?
Leo felt a mix of fear, embarrassment, and guilt after bumping into the person. While the person’s reaction contributed to his fear, the primary source of his discomfort stemmed from his own anxiety about social interactions and the potential consequences of his actions. Alex’s scolding further intensified his feelings of shame and fear because he craved her approval.
- Why is Leo scared of some of the stories, and crying?
Leo is prone to being easily scared, and the campfire stories tap into his pre-existing anxieties. The stories that trigger his crying are particularly impactful because they incorporate his worst fears, making them intensely personal and frightening.
- Why is Leo getting scared?
Leo’s fear stems from a combination of his naturally anxious disposition and the specific content of the stories being told. His age and developmental stage also contribute to his heightened sensitivity to scary situations, and the stories trigger specific fears and insecurities.
- Do Alex and Emily find amusement when Leo is scared, what about when he cries, like if Leo gets scared of some of the stories, do Emily and Alex find amusement in Leo crying, because of that?
Alex and Emily find amusement in Leo’s fear and subsequent crying, but it’s a teasing, not malicious, amusement. Their reaction stems from their own sibling dynamics and doesn’t necessarily indicate a lack of empathy. They are aware their actions may upset Leo, but this awareness doesn’t always stop them.
- Is Owen scared, if so, what are some things he is, or could be, scared of, list some, and why, especially at the campsite?
Owen, being a toddler, is susceptible to various fears. He might be afraid of the darkness, loud noises (like the campfire crackling), unfamiliar people, or being separated from his parents. His fears stem from his limited understanding of the world and his reliance on his parents for security. The vastness and unfamiliar setting of the campsite would amplify these fears.
- Is Owen scared of the campfire, or if he fascinated by it, is it at first Owen will start to whimper if he gets scared of the fire, will Owen be scared at first, but eventually be interested?
Initially, Owen is scared of the campfire’s size and intensity, whimpering at the sight and sounds. However, as he becomes accustomed to the fire’s presence and Alice comforts him, his fear transitions to fascination. He observes it with growing interest.
- Does Owen get scared of the scary stories, or is it Leo being scared that scares Owen?
Owen is not directly scared by the scary stories themselves due to his young age and lack of comprehension. However, witnessing Leo’s intense fear and emotional reactions might indirectly frighten him and make him seek his parents’ comfort.
- Where is everyone going to sleep at the campsite, list it? Owen will most likely be in a tent with his parents.
- Alice and David: Tent
- Emily and Alex: Tent
- Leo: Tent
- Owen: Tent with his parents
- When Leo bumped into the person, was the person nice or were they just irritated?
The person Leo bumped into was initially irritated, but upon seeing Leo’s distress and hearing the apologies from the family, they softened and became understanding.
- What would have happened if the person Leo bumped into was angry and/or irritated, how would Leo react, what would Emily and Alex do, would Alex be mad (not at Leo, yes she is frustrated, but if the person is scolding Leo, Alex might want to protect him), especially if the person is saying things to Leo, especially since the way Leo feels?
If the person had been aggressively angry, Leo would have likely become intensely scared and might have cried. Emily and Alex would try to intervene and apologize profusely. Alex, though frustrated with Leo, would likely feel protective and want to defend him from the stranger’s ire.
- Will Leo still go and get his snacks even after he bumped into the person, will he not want snacks anymore, or will Alex tell Leo to go back to the car or something because of what Leo did, and Leo might have to wait till the next gas station stop to be able to get snacks from the gas station, state the reasons, and then list an outcome of each, also mention how Leo feels, will Leo whine if Alex doesn’t let him get snacks, when Leo has to head back to the car, how will he head back to the car, will he walk back with his head down, or will he run back to the car while possibly crying, which is the best outcome, and why does Leo feel this way about it, and why, why would he whine if he is told to go back to the car?
- Outcome 1: Leo still gets snacks. Leo’s desire for snacks might outweigh his guilt, but he’ll feel apprehensive and keep looking over his shoulder.
- Outcome 2: Leo doesn’t want snacks. His distress over the incident overrides his hunger.
- Outcome 3: Alex sends Leo back to the car. Alex, feeling frustrated, decides that Leo needs a consequence for his actions. Leo feels deeply ashamed, possibly cries, and walks back to the car with his head down. He whines because he’s disappointed and wants the snacks.
The best outcome is Outcome 3. A mild consequence helps Leo learn from his mistake, and the shame motivates self-reflection without being excessively punitive. He feels this way because he’s experiencing a sharp disconnect between his desire for snacks and the shame he feels.
- At night, should Alex and Emily pull a prank, and scare Leo, but it’s just a little scare however, because they don’t want Leo to be affected, it’s just harmless fun, they may make sounds to scare Leo, Alex might play some scary sounds, and creature noises, and other things (but it has to be harmless, especially to how it will make Leo feel, has to be harmless as it’s intended to be a harmless prank), how will Leo react?
Leo will initially jump and scream “Ahhhhh!” in fright. He might be genuinely scared, even if the prank is harmless, but the reaction won’t be prolonged, and he’ll calm down quickly after realizing it’s his sisters playing a prank. He might eventually laugh, but initially he would be scared.
- Is Alex being too hard on Leo when she scolds him?
Alex’s scolding is sometimes harsh, reflecting her own frustration. While Leo’s behavior needs addressing, Alex’s reaction isn’t always proportionate to the offense, showing a need for more patience and understanding.
- Did Leo need to be scolded because of the gas station incident, why?
Yes, Leo needed to be reminded about the importance of paying attention to his surroundings and being mindful of others. The scolding serves as a learning experience, even if the delivery was not ideal.
- Is Leo being annoying and disruptive, if so, why, and list some notable times he was?
Yes, Leo displays disruptive behavior due to his age, energetic nature, and sometimes attention-seeking tendencies.
Notable instances:
- Kicking the car seat repeatedly
- Bumping into the person in the gas station
- Constant questions and actions in the car
- Whining and disrupting family conversations
- Why does Leo start crying when Alex and Emily make a story about him and his worst fears?
The story directly confronts Leo’s anxieties. The personalization amplifies his existing fears, resulting in emotional overwhelm and tears.
- Does Leo cry at scary stories, or does he only cry at the one that includes him and his worst fears, does Leo just get nervous and a little scared at normal scary stories (but doesn’t cry at normal scary stories), is Leo being scared, and his crying disruptive, is it annoying, to his parents and his sisters, would Leo need to stop if it disruptive, is it affecting things, like is it disrupting the peace, would it be disturbing the peace if the regular stories made him scared and cry?
Leo only cries at the story about his worst fears. Regular scary stories make him nervous and scared but he doesn’t cry. His crying is disruptive, but his parents try to be understanding. It only becomes truly disturbing to the peace when the personal story triggers his intense emotional reaction.
- Does Leo always get his way, or does he not, how does he feel about this, and how does everyone else feel, is Alex glad, why?
Leo doesn’t always get his way. He feels frustrated and whiny when thwarted. His parents try to strike a balance between granting reasonable requests and setting limits. Alex is generally glad when Leo doesn’t get his way because it limits his annoying behaviors.
- If Leo ends up wetting himself, why would he do it, and when (it’s not because of anything his sisters said, Leo would be scared of something else, like a nightmare for example), how would his sisters think, especially Alex, will Alex think it’s funny (at least would some part of her think that), what would be happening, especially with underwear, how do they all feel about the situation, especially the parents, Emily, Alex, and Leo, is this normal considering Leo’s age, or is Alex right about him ”acting like a baby” (the quote is referring to earlier when Alex says Leo’s acting like a baby because of his behavior, Alex doesn’t nesscesarily say this, she might, but Alex would definitely be concerned for Leo, as Alex still cares about him)? Write a scene about this, followed by dialogue, and listed. When Leo is crying, he’s screaming like “Ahhhhh!”, Leo will most likely not cry like a baby. If Leo has to change his underwear, will he change it on his own, given his age, and is capable of doing it himself, or will he have help? Where is Owen during all of this, will the commotion wake-up Owen, if so, have that happen, they might have to take care of Owen. At first, Alice and David will up in their tents, they don’t know what’s going on, but they will be questioning what’s happening at first, so they will have to leave their tents to find out. They don’t find out Leo wet himself right away, Leo may say how he feels something (referring to him wetting himself, but he may or may not know, he’s not telling them that he wet himself, he just says he feels something). Alice is comforting Leo, David is also comforting Leo, but even they know Leo isn’t a baby (because he’s ten years old), but they still show concern, it’s mostly Alice who is comforting him, David is being supportive, and still showing concern and tries to help. The scene will most likely end with them going back to bed (Leo will fall asleep in his sleeping bag (maybe but that depends on if it is wet or not), and Alex and Emily talk about what just happened.
(Scene: Leo wakes up screaming in his sleeping bag.)
Leo (screaming): Ahhhhh! Something’s wet!
(Alex and Emily wake up, startled.)
Alex: What was that?!
Emily: Leo? What’s wrong?
(Alice and David wake up in their own tent, hearing the commotion.)
Alice: What’s going on?
David: It sounds like Leo.
(Alice and David enter Leo’s tent. Leo is whimpering and clutching his sleeping bag.)
Alice: Honey, what’s wrong?
Leo (crying): It’s…it’s wet…I feel something wet.
(Alice gently feels Leo’s sleeping bag.)
Alice: Oh, sweetie. You wet yourself. It’s alright.
David: Let’s get you cleaned up.
(Leo is helped to change his underwear. Alex and Emily observe, Alex with a mixture of concern and a slightly amused look on her face. Owen is stirred by the noise and starts crying.)
Owen (crying): Waaaaah!
Alex: Owen woke up!
Alice (to David): You take care of Owen while I help Leo.
David: Okay.
(Owen is soothed and settles down, Alice helps Leo change clothes, and they all eventually settle back into their sleeping bags.)
Alex: (whispering to Emily after everyone has settled back down) That’s… a bit much for a ten year old, though.
Emily: (whispering to Alex) Yeah, you’d think that would have passed.
Alex: (whispering to Emily) I know, maybe he was scared because of that creepy story?
Emily: (whispering to Alex) Possibly. He was pretty shook up after the story about the monster.
Alex: (whispering to Emily) Yeah. Poor kid.
(Leo eventually falls back asleep.)
- If Leo has a nightmare, what would it be about, would he have a nightmare about being left behind at the campsite, or will it just be a normal nightmare, what will happen in the nightmare (like will the family start packing up, they leave, but Leo chases them), determine what happens? Eventually, Leo will be calmed down after the nightmare, after being comforted, determine if he still wants to go camping anymore (he’s not asked if he still wants to go camping, he’s just saying if he wants to or not). Write a scene about this, followed by dialogue, and listed.
(Scene: Leo is asleep in his sleeping bag. He starts whimpering and thrashing around.)
Leo (whispering): No…don’t go…wait for me!
(He sits up, eyes wide with terror.)
Leo (crying): They left me…they left me behind!
(Alice and David rush over to his tent.)
Alice: Leo! What’s wrong?
Leo (crying): I had a nightmare…they were packing up…the car…they drove away…and I was all alone.
David: Shhh, it’s alright, son. It was just a dream. You’re safe now.
Alice: We’re all here, sweetheart.
(Alice hugs Leo tightly. He cries for a few more minutes, then slowly calms down.)
Leo (sniffling): I…I don’t want to go camping anymore.
(The family comforts him, and he eventually falls asleep.)
- Does Leo cry like a baby, does he go “Waaaaah”, I think that would be considered crying like a baby, what do you think, does he do it?
No, Leo does not cry like a baby. He screams in fright, sobs, or cries with more age-appropriate sounds.
- Is it funny when Alex and Emily tease Leo, especially at the campfire scene, or is it not funny?
The teasing isn’t genuinely funny; it is more of a sibling dynamic where they push his boundaries and enjoy the reaction. The reader may find some amusement in the dynamic but it would lack the traditional humor found in other parts of the narrative.
- Does Leo’s responses to being scared, make Alex right about him “acting like a baby”, or is Alex right about Leo’s behavior in general, like if Leo is just being annoying?
Leo’s fear responses don’t necessarily make Alex right about him “acting like a baby,” but his other behaviors, like whining and being disruptive, sometimes justify her annoyance. It’s a mix of age-appropriate reactions and irritating behavior.
- Are there times Emily and Alex actually think Leo is funny (especially if he is doing something silly), what are some things they would think is funny that Leo is doing, mention some?
Yes. They might find his clumsy attempts at being brave or his silly facial expressions funny.
- If Leo were to be singing, would Alex find it annoying?
Yes, if Leo sings off-key or repeatedly, Alex might find it annoying.
- If Alex calls Leo a “brat”, how would Leo feel?
Leo would feel hurt, sad, and possibly angry.
- Are there ever times where Alex is ever nice to Leo?
Yes, Alex shows occasional kindness and care towards Leo, but it’s often overshadowed by her frustration with his behavior.
- If Leo is being disruptive, to the point where David has to tell Leo he will not be going camping if he continues this, what would Leo be doing to make David say that, what would happen, who would look after Leo then (like a relative or a neighbor that is friends with Alice and David), would David be in the right for this, is David saying that, and wouldn’t actually leave him, how would Leo feel, how would Alex feel?
Leo’s disruptive behavior might include tantrums, constant complaining, ignoring instructions, or general unruliness. David’s threat is a tactic to get him to behave, not a genuine plan to leave him behind. A grandparent or trusted neighbor might care for Leo if the threat escalated to a point where other arrangements needed to be made. David is partially in the right to set boundaries, but his approach is harsh, and he will likely not follow through with his threat. Leo will feel scared and sad. Alex, while annoyed, will also be worried.
- Are David and Alice always firm with Leo, or is it only when Leo does specific things, especially when he acts up?
David and Alice are firm with Leo when he misbehaves but also show affection and understanding. They don’t maintain a constantly firm demeanor, instead adopting varied parenting styles as situations demand.
- Is the family able to enjoy family trips, or is Leo too annoying, if so, why or why not?
The family enjoys their trips despite Leo’s annoying behavior. While his actions create moments of chaos, they also contribute to the family’s dynamic and shared experiences. The family adapts and still finds ways to have fun.